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Thursday, 9 November 2017

I asked an old wise man who cannot see

This is my Poem about an old wise man, Hope you guys like it!
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  1. Unknown19 November 2017 at 17:12

    Well done son. I enjoyed reading your poem and I really liked how you described what colour is like poeticaly. My favourite line is when you described colour like "Fluffy candy floss melting in my mouth". Good effort :)

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